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Thursday, February 23, 2012

eric 's sonnet

Eric's sonnet was a really nice sonnet. It showed compassion, detail, and story beginning and end. It express what happens at soccer and sports. It also showed people what it feels like to play for your team. It feels so exciting too.

It shows determination at everything you want and desired. The sonnet tells not give up on dreams and hopes on life. Sports teach you not to cheat in life or anywhere else. It's a very bad habiat, and one should want to  follow it.

Sports also teach you about teamwork. Help is always good for people in any situtation. Working together is the window of teamwork. In sports, no one people to ball hog or something like that. There's no I in team.

In conclusion, eric showed teamwork, dermination, and compassion in his sonnet. It shows what people give out in life a sacfires. People do what they can to try and become a somebody. Someone who is very famous at something.

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