eric 's sonnet

Eric's sonnet was a really nice sonnet. It showed compassion, detail, and story beginning and end. It express what happens at soccer and sports. It also showed people what it feels like to play for your team. It feels so exciting too.

It shows determination at everything you want and desired. The sonnet tells not give up on dreams and hopes on life. Sports teach you not to cheat in life or anywhere else. It's a very bad habiat, and one should want to  follow it.

Sports also teach you about teamwork. Help is always good for people in any situtation. Working together is the window of teamwork. In sports, no one people to ball hog or something like that. There's no I in team.

In conclusion, eric showed teamwork, dermination, and compassion in his sonnet. It shows what people give out in life a sacfires. People do what they can to try and become a somebody. Someone who is very famous at something.

My sonnet

Time square has bright lights that are beautiful. It will make all dreams come true in a instant. New york is so good that they made a musical. Brooklyn feels so far away from the Bronx that it's distant . Manhattan is one of the best places. It makes new york brighter each and every day. Everytime you look around you see smiling faces. The best day to see time square is saturday.

What happens to dreams durtifed

People have dreams to accomplished so they can be successful, or famous. We all have dreams. But \sometimes they have to wait, to keep balance  in our life. For example, we go through school,education, and other personal things to get to where we want to go.

We go through to school to prepare ourselves for real world. But the good thing about school is that you have plenty of choices along the way. If you can't get to your dream, then maybe you could have something to fall back on. It would help save a lot of money.

Let say if I want to be in NBA, because of college basketball. If I was in there for twenty years and I broke my leg, then I had to quit. That's means I have to fall back on something. It how we still keep going, even after a injury.

what is poetry

Poetry is a meaningful message to people's thought and feelings. Poetry can be about love, or friends,or somewhere you lived your entire life. It's suppose to express something about you, or your best friend.Poems are a perfect way of showing poetry. Poetry and poems should always have a expression, or a least a meaning to the poem.Poetry should never be express as hate.

But there are different types of poetry. Like haiku or Lyrics, That could be expressed like a song. A lot of singers make poems out of music. Sometimes there could be poetry that comes from your heart. That could be the only way to express poems. From the heart and the mind.

It takes the mind and the heart,to understand what feelings are. Feelings are the window of poetry.Without feeling,there is no way to express poetry.

Artist work & history

My artist's named is Paul Cezanne.He lived in France in 1880. Paul is an amazing artist and he loved doing it. His mom loved it but his father didn't. His father wanted Paul to be a lawyer or at least work at his bank. Mr.Cezanne never liked art because he could never understand it.

Paul wanted to follow his dream, but to please his dad he went to law school for 2 years. He felt really miserable doing what he was doing. Mom saw Paul being miserable so she asked Mr. Cezanne to let him be in art school. He saw how miserable it was Paul to, so he let Paul take art school.

It took 2 years for Paul to be able to understand art. After that he met a friend and they went to Paris. Unfortunately a war was going on in paris. Paul tried to write out the themes to past the time. Years later he gave his art to galleries and he made millions. He died a happy man.